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Secret origins 02 Starfire page 11 by PauloSiqueira Secret origins 02 Starfire page 11 by PauloSiqueira
This page had some revisions.
The one with the guy lying on the bed , on first panel, was rejected
No problem with the art, but they decided to revise some part of the script and was necessary to modify some pages that already were ready
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:iconwillyread:
WillyRead Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
[Otima página!
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AriesWarlock Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
Very nice. I liked seeing this Starfire fighting for her life.
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:iconbastler:
bastler Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
I remember her first origins comic, it had some sexual undertones.
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OcioProduction Featured By Owner Edited Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
why Barry Windsor Smith on the wall? XDXD
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NickFireStreak Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Cara, a DC precisa de mais desenhistas como você!!! Parabéns, tua arte é incrível!!!
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Salkafar Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
...I guess the outright suggestion she was a sex slave was too much for the kids.


....It really is, isn't it? I mean this isn't an adult comic. Maybe it should be...
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PlanetKhaos Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Do they pay you extra to handle significant changes like that?
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:iconvanchoran:
vanchoran Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
great job
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:icondruje:
druje Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
 Gorgeous, Paulo!
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NStevenHarris Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Professional Artist
Man that seems like a time consuming revision.
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BrenoRanyere Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dá muito trabalho refazer uma página?
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alexandrenascimento Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
fantástico... inspirador!!!!
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JBarraxJr Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
excellent as usual. Thanks for posting the original. :-)
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MARCIOABREU7 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Muito chato isso...depois de pronto, resolvem mudar.
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:iconcitybuilder:
citybuilder Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
I will take the left one right one leads to under age story problems unless she suppose to have started off as a 18 year old in trouble.
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The left stills has sexual undertones to it(it's just subtle) and why would it be a story problem? Sexual slavery happens at all ages. We don't have to pretend that it only happens to people 18+, especially considering most sex slaves are under that age. And that was the case in her old origins.
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citybuilder Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015
true I was meaning the fight vs the sex lol which one is more of a fight lol.
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JonasTrindade Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Trampo foda Paulo \o.
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Lightning-Powered Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Professional General Artist
did you draw the redo on a separate paper or was it digitally added? or did you really redraw EVERY SINGLE LINE IN PENCIL?!
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JoshJ81 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Crazy how you had to redesign the backgrounds...great job but sorry you had to do that.
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nexcolors Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
How did you edit it? Did you erase the part of the panel or switched on a photoshopped copy?
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BroHawk Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
Ahhhhg!
That had to be such a pain in the butt to do all those
changes to an already perfect page...
Then you do the impossible and make it more perfect.
I hope you got paid twice.;)
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frelncer Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thanks for sharing that change.
Cannot wait until you start accepting commissions again.
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aidenke Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
Love seeing the progression of how these changes and revisions happen - the art is amazing for both, and gives you two concepts of the story that are both pretty fun.

Always, always love seeing your posts!
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tomgarcia Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Hahah! Mandaram tirar a insinuação de safanagem XD. De qualquer maneira, arte incrível, cara!
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LucasBoltagon Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
I would SO read a Starfire book by you !
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VikBogdanovic Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Professional
Wow, man. They do that quite often, huh? You handled it flawlessly, as usual.

-V!K
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